Laser

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Blue Bird, Dec 29, 2008.

  1. Blue Bird

    Blue Bird Active Member

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    Signature Below ...

    Version #1:

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    Version #2:

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    Vote Which version is better and rate/rank and tell me what you think.
     
  2. iK3VRR

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    IMO the second one is better because you equaled out the sides with those red brushes or whatever that red stuff is
     
  3. Blue Bird

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    thanks anyone else?
     
  4. noel_almendras

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    i don't get it...... not much flow or composition for that matter.....
    full of black , blank space and with no real focal ?
    ummmm LOLCAT ! haha :)
     
  5. Blue Bird

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    i haven't open PS for ages. like 6 months.
     
  6. Broken

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    Anywho.
    Lacks flow, composition, and that bar on the right really needs to be removed. We know you're Bluebird...you posted it?
    Text isn't that readable on the right in V2, and the red splodge is entirely random, too much negative space too, need to incorporate something into the background.
     
  7. .atwa

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    I don't think you should remove the red bar. It gives it a special funny-weird feeling ...dunno. Black space is a turn off. I would make the laser brighter.
     
  8. Zebraa

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    Doesn't look blended at all and it's a bit plain.
    Try sharpening it a bit more.
    Also the text is hard to see.
     
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    Well that weird red smudge you added doesn't match the flow of the laser. it is just kinda like floating out there. I like the idea it is just kinda weird ish to me..
     
  10. Blue Bird

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    thanks for all the comments guys, Much Appreciated.
     

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