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CNC?

please be strict and tell me what i should fix.

V1

V2

 

stricly no curly weird lines? (with a render like this anyway)

 

ok thank you. Anyone else?

 

Added a new version.

 

It looks like you squished the render a bit, are you holding shift while you re-size it?

 

i was holding shift D;

you sure its not your comp?

i'm not seeing any squish.

 

I see a squish too D:
Its a vertical squish
not that big of a deal though...
V2 imo :] because it has more in the background, though I think it still needs work.

 

i'm give this one a few more tries i finished it & wasn't to sure of myself i think i'm start from scratch.

Thanks for the CNC guys

 

There not bad but i prefere you others alot more ^_^
The lines look slightly out of place as well >.<