Hello all, this is my version 2.I removed the pink c4d effects on both side of the tag(bottom),adjust the smudge on the left side,play a little with the clipping masks,burn the tag a bit more to try to get more depth and finally i removed the text,but can't see where it could looks good.Oh,and a replace the white border by a 2px black.Any better?
Text would like fine in the lower right imo on the red part beside his arm, and v2 looks a lot better. that white light seems over powering for the other dark colors you have here tho I think.
Hey looks decent, I think you need to make your image stand out just a bit more though because it seems a little flat around his body.