Kof Sprte Tag

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by mobi861, Aug 23, 2009.

  1. mobi861

    mobi861 Well-Known Member

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  2. Papermache

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    I like everything except a few points, they are threefold.

    First, go 45 degrees up and right from his left foot (our right) and you will come to a dot of yellow in the background surrounded by an orange glow.
    Second, the yellow line just past that dot going in the same direction.
    Third, The red line on the top left.

    Everything else looks good, the colors are very purdy.
     
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    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    Lol Valar, you got good eyes. :D
    I like the concept and everything, the light source could ve been a little bit brighter though.
     
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    Very nice tag! One thing I would change would be making the lightsource a bit more intense. Also next time try not to make the focal point in the middle of the canvas. That kills the composistion. But everything else is very nice.
     
  5. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    I didn' read these comments so don't blame me if I repeat what someone says lD. I think you can add some serious depth if you distance the bubble c4d in the right portion. Blur? :D
     
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    it could use some major blending of the bg and the effects around the render. it looks like hes just floating in mid air and the background is miles away. also, what valar says is true cuz it throws off the flow.

    great text ftw!
     

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