Yeah well, this is my first piece with only using c4d's and effects, no brushing or anything. I kinda had trouble with the text on this one so that's what came out. Tell me what i can fix up and HOW i can fix it up, i'll post updates. Thanks. I used about 7 different C4D's bits of each and some how this is what came out. Took me well over an hour, but in my opinion i think it was worth it
I think you should work on the blending of the render with the background, that doesnt mean like erase the edges of the render. I usually do it by finding colours that suite the colours of the render itself. You should work on your background and not have it so chaotic. In a tag you look for a focus, so a tiny bit of blur wont hurt (dont go crazy with it though). The top left corner looks out of place and goes against the flow of the tag (you have everything going from the bottom to the top in a diagonal style, and that corner bit kinds screws up the whole flow). My last piece of advice would be, you don't always need text, only when you can match it to the tag should it be used, or else it ruins the tag (not always). These are just my thoughts on it gl
