Killzone

I've been really bored lately, so this is what I came up with.


I'm looking for C&C because I really want to improve since I've been at the same level for a while.
Thanks in advance.

 

Add to the background, even if you just brush in/burn tool for more depth.

 

nice depth and focal. smudging could use some work though. it's a nice high novice sig though.

 

depth is very nice, but it's kind of lacking effects, looks a bit boring in some places. try adding some c4d's, clipping masks, or whatever you like best.. Other then that, as said above, it's not a bad sig at all.

 

Thanks for all the tips guys.
I've been without C4Ds for a while, so this is my first time in about a month.

I'll look up some smudging tuts then to see if I can improve.
Thanks again all

 

Try to work on the smudging.. everything else looks pretty decent

 

Thanks.

 

Hmm...the smudging is...unique but kind of poorly executed. That is the only problem I see.