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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Drahgon, Dec 8, 2008.

  1. Drahgon

    Drahgon Senior Member

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    V1
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  2. Proximity-HazeD

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    The blue lines aren't apparent enough!
    I say make them a stronger glow, and the guy to the right is bothering me because
    you only have him half blurred and it looks like a strong blur, take the blur off him
    and add a lighter one (Gaussian Blur 0.2-0.5)
    Also because of how bright it is you should add a black boarder like 3-4 pixels just top and bottom IMO
    To my eyes it looks like you cut it out and cover the rest of the picture.
    Without a boarder on it I just wanna continue on the photo as a larger art peace
    putting a boarder on there would help my mind stay off that.
    It's like your teasing me or something lol :D

    Great job though I love it
     
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    liking the depth
    but work on the colors, make the blue stand out more and tone the yellow down to greyish white ;)
     
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    thanks, i'll add a v2 soon
     
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    added v2 and v3
     
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    v3 looks nice i like the idea ur going for. hopefully its a winner for you :)
     

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