~* Killzone-&-bleach Signatures² *~

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  1. LostUchiha

    LostUchiha Well-Known Member

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    C&C very much appreciated.

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  2. 1st one is a bit too sharpened towards the bottom, 2nd one is too chaotic (no real focal).

    Keep trying!
     
  3. Hoplite_A2

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    Whoa...
    I kind of disagree with phoenix (not knockin' ya bro. :) ).

    I think the bottom one is excellent. ;)
    The top one is alright, but something about
    the render looks bad imo. Can't put my finger
    on it though. :\

    Really like the v2 of the second one. :D
    Very nice. Could use a bit more depth though.

    Nice work
     
  4. LostUchiha

    LostUchiha Well-Known Member

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    Possibly the text makes it look bad in the first one?
     
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    whats with the pink in the first one?
    i like v1 of the second sig. a little more color than v2 i think.
     
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    I'm not gonna lie, the second one looks like garbage. I think it's a really ugly trend, and like Phoenix said, there's no focal. the first time I saw it I saw the blade-things on the right of the sig. I studied it a bit more, and it looks aweful. Maybe if the render and colors were better, the trend would work. The render itself is ugly compared to the rest of the sig, colors, and the drawing of it.


    The first one though, it rocks, love the colors, and I love oversharpened bit too, gj on that. The text could use a bit of an overhaul though.
     
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    the clipping mask ruins it imo
     
  8. LostUchiha

    LostUchiha Well-Known Member

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    What the trend if I may ask?
     
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    i think the first one looks good nice smudging.
     

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