Killer Rabbit [render]

My first render ^_^ , hope you enjoy it.

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Render:

 

its a lil choppy..keep practicin especially the tiny black outline-it needs to be cut...

 

Looks choppy good try tho ...

 

thanks ppl, that all that i wanted to know...opinions are always great to get...cheers

btw, any suggestion, how to take the black line?

 

Well i usually magify the image to 1600% use the pen tool and do a outline then do a feather of 0.5 then delete the extra stuff .. i have no idea what you did ... but you can try that if it helps you out ... good luck

 

ok thanks...well the onyl thing that i did was getting a brush zoom in it like 10times, and take all the image that i didnt want...loool as i said this is my first

 

Very choppy, nice render to cut though.

 

Choppy

 

very choppy but keep trying

 

First - Save in png
Second - Try use pen tool or something similar to cut because the brush all the other away is not good
Third - Try again

 

Very Interesting Image... The But looks pretty good, Keep up the Work.

-Magical Samurai