That's pretty damn nice I just don't like the way it's cut off on the right side And the glow near their hands ends pretty abruptly
I agree with the others, the cut off kind of throws off the "flow." But all in all not bad. It has a very interesting concept as well as some very neat lighting. But I think the light on the arms would be more "intense" if they were that close to such a strong lightsource. Also the background seems a bit empty, but all in all not bad.