Kalli's Epic Critique Thread

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Kalli, Jul 18, 2007.

  1. Kalli

    Kalli Senior Member

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    Alright Ima go eat really quick but then when I get back anyone who posted I will CnC.
     
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    Tear me up please :)

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    Alright, I am on...lets go!
     
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    critique away =)
     
  7. Kalli

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    Thuggnangel -

    Pshhh...I don't want to critique you. What the heck were you thinking posting in here....you loser! Hehe!

    This is definitely an interesting style of a tag, but I am not sure that the style completely worked in making a nice tag. I think that if worked on however, it could definitely be turned into a very interesting tag. The first thing that could definitely use some work is the text. First off, get rid of the extra text on the bottom right, that just look stupid. Then I think the font choice was not the best, but color was pretty good. However, also I think there could be some better placement of text. The other thing is the background. On the left you just have another render/stock which kinda looks weird and almost like you were too lazy to really try to put any effects in the background, so you just stuck a render/stock. I think it would look much better with some nice effects, this usually never really works all that well. Then on the right side, its kinda just a dark and light area, there is almost no depth on that side at all.

    Then the other thing, is that the effects you do have in the tag are VERY minimal. There is no flow whatsoever, very little depth, not really any at all, and a large lack of effects. There is nothing really going on in the tag. Just kinda looks like a bunch of random things put into one tag. I would really suggest trying to plan it out, mainly to get some nice flow in the tag. The only thing I think that you really did hit dead on was the lighting. I can not really complain about that at all, you did a very nice job in strength and placement.
     
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    Im actually getting off m8....my cousin needs to use the computer for school. I will critique yours though first thing in the morning when I get on.
     
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    Posted this earlier but I guess you weren't on at the time. I appreciate the time you put into your critiques.

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    bottom current if you don't mind :D
     
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    critique away :)
     
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