Pretty good. I think the clounded streak in the front may be a good idea, but there might be a little too much of an emphasis on it here. May want to make it a little more vague. I think a nicer looking text would help too. Still a nice signature however.
Totally sexy. I agree with astro on making the streak vague. The kirbir text looks a little warped though.
Very nice. The sub-text could be a tad shorter though. Not into it rolling off the side like that. Still extremely hot sig though. Nice gift.