i like this one a lot better. text is still tough to read, seems like that's somethin you like though?
sup showtime >=) the bg does not flow at all with overall flow and composition thus lacking the depth fields in the effects them selves, and the border def must go...also do a lil color adjusting to the subject it self or add some light reflection on the subject..not bad for rusty?....sum times devour' typo is not a issue it itself can become effect and also adds additional viewing time to piece.