Just Dance

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by CrimsonWarlocke, Aug 18, 2009.

  1. Aug 18, 2009 at 9:40 PM #1
    CrimsonWarlocke

    CrimsonWarlocke Well-Known Member

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    Whelp...here's a new one from me...any CnC is appreciated :D

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  2. Aug 19, 2009 at 1:44 AM #2
    Papermache

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    Quite messy. I do not like the render placement and the flow is off. I do really like the KHAOS text, but do not like the just dance text below. Maybe make it a bit softer?
     
  3. Aug 19, 2009 at 9:52 AM #3
    Strykor

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    There is too much and too sharp.
    You have multiple focals, the viewer does not know where to look at.
    If you wanted to achieve this, good job, if not work on that.
    As mentioned above the style of "Khaos" does not fit in the wholy style of the tag.
    It should be something grungy too.
     

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