Just Came Back, 2 Fotoshp

i was following a tutorial but i kinda side tracked and did my own thing lol

 

i think its a little too much......... too contrasted, too sharpened........

its not that bad, just try to tone it down a bit

 

Too bright and over sharpened.

 

The colors are too bright. Add some black/negative space maybe on the outer parts of the sig.

 

aight thanks guys this helps, i knew there was something wrong with it but i couldnt figure out what. i knew i used the sharpen too much. thx much appreciated

 

heres the fixed Version of this ...... well i think i fix it lol