Journey

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Paulie, Dec 29, 2008.

  1. Paulie

    Paulie Well-Known Member

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  2. iK3VRR

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    lol in my opinion it looks like a video game screenshot, but I like that effect you put around that guy but for your next sig try following a full sig tutorial because thats a good way to get better
     
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    the focal doesn't blend in well at all..... sorta flat
    it sorta looks stuck on there and separate from the rest of the background....
    maybe some color change or something.... nice smooth flow though
     
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    The orange just makes, no sense, destroys any sense of realism you may have wanted and overall doesn't look good.
    It's a bit flat, back of the ship doesn't blend in the water, it could be good with a bit more work.
    Text = No.
    Kind of looks like the water on the right blends into what would be the sky too.
     
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    Agreeing with broken, nice concept though.
     
  6. Paulie

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    No its not. :huh:


    This is work in progress, its obviously not done, I'm just asking for your guys opinions.
     
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    And we just gave them?
     
  8. Paulie

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    I dont think so. You just pointed out the cons of this sig, but you didn't told me how to improve it. I dont have ----- views on sigs than you do, no?
     
  9. Broken

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    Sorry how does blindly pointing out the supposed "pros" in your sig help you at all?
    You got a list of things you need to prove, that's the point of constructive criticism.

    I told you how to improve it.
    Remove the text.
    Remove the random blue smudging that blends the sky and water
    Remove the Orange
    Blend the back of the ship better.

    What else do you want to hear? Don't post if you're not willing to accept comments that are far more helpful then "zomg ---".

    PS : No idea what you mean by "I dont have ---- views on sigs", due to the blocked word.
     
  10. Paulie

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    It was the word 'professionall'. It blocks the word for some reason.
     
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    Alot of people don't realise when your telling somebody the cons of a sig its also telling you what not to do/what to fix...

    Just don't take it the wrong way
     
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    I'm not good at C&c so here it goes.

    - Try to make render blend in more, The signature is basically aiming for bluey yellowy colours and you got your brown render in the middle.
    - Text doesn't go with it at all so I think you should only add it once you've finished the signature completely.
     
  13. Broken

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    To stop ratings and turning the site into NSL.
    Anyway.

    Just, learn to take criticism.
     
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    What, Broken said.
     
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    Like people have said remove the orange and blend the render in more.
     

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