Joey Vs. Youngblood

VU-Youngblood says:
Joey wants to battle the don/ Knowing well that he don't want none/ everyone knows who I am even Jamaicans call me the "mon"/ Joey's gonna be running for his life like an ex-con/ Joey be easy, my rhymes are like whiplashes/ spit hot fire to your brain, call it hot flashes/


[ Joey ] - My daughter & inspiration --=> says:
This freaks battle weak, ya lines more old news the a paper from last week/
I've seen better flows watchin my self take a leak asa matter of factly geek/
this guy like vicious sex with injured pets/
so he trys to cover it up like unexplained business debts/
have this fool droolin' at the sight of my lyrics/
you may not respect my skill but your gonna fear it/


6 bars of death

 

My structres way off now that i look at it...and my lines are blah but meh..

 

lol mine is worse though, I had nothing to write about

 

just insult the person...its BATTLE rap

 

lol bah

 

You call that a bar son?/
I call it close to bar none/
This rap ---- aint even pretty/
So why you havin' so much fun?/

This is Cheeky and best believe/
That my bars is tight like a nuns vagina/
Im on a league much higher/
You just a minor/

Thats 8 bars done with/
And I ripped everyone steady/
Wanna battle the rest out?/
Get your mind right and get ready/

 

you should really combine your lines

 

Mr cheeky spits nitrogen, it had me all sleepy/
my ass raps better, the tru mr. cheeky/
my raps leave your brain on freeze/
give you brain free, better get some aleve/
I can't see you mr. cheeky cuz your so beaneath me/
I'm ripping this dude acapella without a beat/
look go back and surf the stuff section/
because we use words in here that your mom won't even mention/

 

You just talkin' a lot of ----/
But aint got a good reason/
My flow bring people together/
Like the Christmas season/
I bust a nut in your girls mouth/
She said "it didnt faze me"/
The b1tch started actin/
Like me and spittin crazy/
You a homosexual n1gga/
I cant even describe your gender/
So im takin you out the picture/
Like a mothaf*ckin game render/

 

This dude cusses and uses racial terms/
when he's just mad that his girl holds my sperm/
she's my sperm bank similiar to a bloodbank/
She's store it, after I unload like a military tank/
Your gonna render me? look up the definition/
render means created images, I've been hit with benediction/
i ain't homosexual, your views just twisted/
nobody pays attention to you so you cease to existed/

 

anyone gonna vote on the original battle?

 

hahaha that one was good..keep it up guys

 

hey it's you

 

Whats me? :blink:

 

your the girl that's like....cool