Jessica

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by dp.Majestic, Aug 5, 2010.

  1. dp.Majestic

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    Trying a new style, here is my first outcome.

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  2. Hoplite_A2

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    Definitely some improvement here! ;)
    Let's start with the bad so we end on the good notes.

    Bad: Coloring is off, colors are a little too close and kinda ugly imo.
    C4D needs to be blended a little more on the right side... kinda chunky.
    FHS - Floating Head Syndrome :(
    Border.

    Good:
    Lighting looks much better than your previous tags. :)
    Clean focal point! Yayah!
    I like the C4Ds you used, although I think that some more practice will help.
    Flow isn't bad. Still some more work would be nice, but it's decent. ^_^


    Overall a big improvement.
    Keep it up mate.
     

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