Jessica Alba (sexy) Signature

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  1. cave

    cave Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">[​IMG]
    made in photoshop cs3
    40+layers
    Critique?
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  2. cave

    cave Well-Known Member

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    nobody?
     
  3. Sanity Penguin

    Sanity Penguin My sex is on fire

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    Pretty cool. I like the colours and lighting and really like the text. It fits right in.
    Not too fond of the render itself though because of some flaws that are in the rendering of the hair. You can see some obvious holes and stuff in there, breaking down the quality of the render and thus of the sig itself :)
     
  4. cave

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    lol.. yeah the render isnt that great.
    got it from the render section here actually.
     
  5. Headshoot

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    Render is kinda blurry, but effects are friki'n awesome .
     
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    yeah, the render's a bit blurry but i'm diggin the effects. maybe raise the opactiy of her left/right arm
     
  7. cave

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    thanks a lot guys,
    yeah aside from the render its ------in rad...
     
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    whoa dis 1's a maaterpiece 9/10 still missing something :/
     
  9. Za¡n

    Za¡n KEEP IT CLEAN

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    alittle blurry bro, maybe get alittle of that filter contrast on a flattened layer; smaller text looks alittle distorted, make sure when you use the smaller fonts sometimes its better to change the text anti aliasing method to 'none' to get a more defined look
     
  10. Salme

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    Critique? I'll give it a shot.

    Details - Overall detail look awesome, but those black dots on the right annoy me a bit, it might look better when they are bluish more?
    Lighting - Correct me if i'm wrong but sohuldn't it be on the left side and on the front of the render? Would merge perfect with the renders natural lighting.
    Text - It's not bad. Perhaps blend it more with the backround but not too much and make it more interesting by adding few selfmade details or something like that IMO.
    Overall Look - The right side of the render and sig must have seen alot of work. On the right the render is well blended in with the backround, added some light effects making it look very detailed (nice job). The left side of the render (arm and hair) looks kinda plain like ''put it there and leave it''. If you blend the hair a bit and also the arm it would look better, it would also hide the flaws of the render.

    I'm no expert but I would give it a 7/10 :wub: Enjoy.

    ~Salme :welcome:
     
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    yea the lighting looks out of place and on the bottom right of her the effects there seem out of place but other than that its good
     
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    The light source on the render is coming from the left side. In your tag, it's the right side. Fixing this probably will make the tag look much better.

    My only complaint is the light source and those dots on the bottom right. Try blending them in a bit more?

    Nice tag though! :D loving your text
     
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    thanks a lot for the feedback everyone :)
    I will keep all of those in my head for the next signature!
     
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    I was gonna say what it lacks, but you fixed everything about it in the version that you have in your current signature... So I'll comment on that one... I love it!
     
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    Yeah i like the v2 much better!
     

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