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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by ctmagic, Oct 28, 2008.

  1. ctmagic

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    chipmunk2k5 Well-Known Member

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    I don't like this piece, text needs work and the flow needs a lot of work. I also don't like how its like a fraction of a render.. and the background doesn't seem like it matches
     
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    should i throw in a bunch of random stocks, and add a drop shadow on my text? :D

    the pic was like that, the focus is on the sax... tried another version...

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    idk how you should improve it to be honest =x

    the text is to big takes away from the focal, the background is a lil bit to ... off is the only word i can think of..

    the render is not something that would go in a spacey looking thing...

    also the render isnt blended that well

    and it just looks thrown together
     
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    yeah, background is lacking?
     
  6. ctmagic

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    thrown together? this is where i started...

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    dude those your own tags you are wearing? this one i just made might be crap, but i dont know if i would be saying anything about a sig being thrown together with sigs like yours, or any comments about flow at that.
     
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    this tag seems ok to me.. if id suggest anythin it would be the text.. ;)
     
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    wow magic... lol you asked for cnc i gave you cnc if you dont like it it's to bad dont ask for cnc if you can't take the CRITICISM

    and yes. it looks thrown together to me, deal with it cant change my opinion on that. show me the .psd and prove me wrong.

    dont diss my sigs because i dont like yours. get over it kid or get the hell off the forums k? thx

    EDIT: changed my sigs for you, sorry I don't update my sig everytime i create a new one ;)

    by the way I showed your sig to a chick I knew and she said "pretty" if that makes you feel better learn to not be a douche about things.
     
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    bitch fight?
    anyways, not to fond of the tag as a whole, something about the text strikes my fancy.
    i think it might look good to me at least if you built around it as a focal.
    i hadn't noticed the sax until you mentioned it, my eye is drawn a little to he right to the top of the text.
     
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    lol, thanks for changing that sig and congrats at taking this down another notch with your name calling. im not a fan of my own sig either, just thought it was funny that you critisized something that your horrible at yourself, really what bothers me about your post is the arrogant undertones, like you think your really good or something... funny stuff right there. anyways, good looking out chief
     
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    Edit: I will just pm you my response, no reason to argue here.
     

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