Jay-z(x2) And Kanye

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  1. marksmage

    marksmage Well-Known Member

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    2nd one good effects but the render/stock got too small.
    3rd one its the best one, you could erase some parts of the brushs in his face and the pattern a bit more of opacity.
    and in all of them..work on blending and ilu. :) .
     
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    Thank you.. One the third one.. i didnt want the scan lines to pop out oto much.. just wanted them to add to the effect in the background... and the second... i kinda like the size it gives him a computeristic look..

    but thanks again :)

    ilu?
     
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    I would like to first say that these are great for first sigs with real people.

    For the first one, the only thing that I noticed is the rectangle copy out there in the right. It's not much though, maybe just the fact that it's touching the right border. Don't worry about it that much. :D
    I like the center for the second one. However, the purple on the left and the blue on the right is a bit off. I think there's just too much of those parts, that's all.
    The third one seems too bright. It looks like you were just trying to make it a more simple background but it just looks like it is overexposed.

    Overall, these have great effects and I like the text you put in. Good job. :)
     
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    Thanks.. My text used to be HORRIBLE

    but then I found this great tutorial for text and now i figured it out.. I'm trying to joni a crew so I decided to try something that I have never done before.. and this is it,, :)
     
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    Think he means iluminosity, 3rd one is best, 2nd 1 like others said render is a tad too small, 1st one too much blur, otherwise looks good.
     
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    Thank you.. I also liked that one the most...
     

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