Jabbawockeez.

Thoughts?

 

nice, i like it. maybe if the background was more of the render colour and the render blended better it'd be sweet, can i have that render/stock btw? pm me it if so ;d

 

cheers for the feedback mate. and yeh pmed you!

 

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Nice tone of coloring that works with the feel of the tag. Could use less topaz though

 

Less contrast on the render, less topaz, and the text could be sharper looking. Give it a subtitle too, just the one line of text looks basic and unfinished.

Overall, nicely done bro.

 

too sharp too much contrast

 

Il try and reduce the topaz effect a little.
And magic i do agree about the text, but the crew name is so long i found it hard to place sub text, maybe the sig would look better without any text.. idk.

cheers tho guys for giving me some feedback on it.

 

break the text down by syllables

Jabba on top and Wockeez on the bottom since you can't come up with some subtext. And just play with the sizing

 

thatd look good with some C4D text

 

Ok guys cheers, il take your advice AP and break it down, if i get a chance Il whip up some C4D text just to see how it looks.

Thanks again for taking the time to give me some fb.