J Abla

Im not a fan of black and white but following this tut, i kinda had to, let me know what you think please.

 

I can see what your trying to do but its not put together well imo .. random effects on left and nothing on right.

 

Text is poor.
To Empty on right side.
Effects are good on the left.
Nice Overall.

~bb!

 

agreeing with killah, right side is a turn off :/. Though the sparkle-stuff is nice .

 

ya i know it wasnt put together well, i still dont get smudging much....but thanks guys.

 

floating head

 

you dont see her shirt?! O.O

 

add some more effects on the right side and try to have color in it, I think it would look better

 

i really can't see the shirt at all is it the gray part below her head? if so it blends in with the background way too much it seriously looks to me like she has no neck and below. it might be just me lol