Iunno

Not really feeling this dunno whether to add to it or anything

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Doesn't really look like theirs anything you can do. It just seems like the problem is the render, can't see much being done with it, at least not where it is.

 

Thanks, anyone else?

 

looks a tad too plain plus the render and back dont seen like they go together

 

umm... its a stock not a render

 

I like it but maybe add some coloring to her eyes? You know a strong color that draws attention to them...

 

Ok tried it out

 

Dang, Anyone?

 

cmon people

 

It looks much better with the eye thing, good job.

 

Thanks mort for being the only one that suggested a way to improve it