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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .Rey, Sep 5, 2008.

  1. .Rey

    .Rey Well-Known Member

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    Hopefully I'm getting better, Although I know im still horrible at tags, but meh, im learning.

    C&C please.

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  2. duckieking

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    weird dimesions, but it's ok : )
    The main point I see is to get a border ... the flame on the top is ugly with the very sharp black stopline ; ) Fading the flames on top a bit, might also be a good idea ;)
    In general, I'd lift my render I bit higher, towards the top, So I can let him fade in with my background. This works very nice with some splatter brushes : ) just a hint for future tags ;)
     
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    i like the way you made the smudges (or whatever that is behind him) brighter on the bottom. helpes with the lighting.
     
  4. .Rey

    .Rey Well-Known Member

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