Ipod Theme

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  1. Prankster

    Prankster Member

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    Ok, i was watching some of those old I-Pod adverts the black & white ones and i was inspired ^^.
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    It may not be that great, but i had fun making it ^^.

    All CnC welcome.

    Edit: Ive added the Greyscale version.

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  2. nod84

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    Don't take my advice cause I am a noob, but the black and white doesn't really fit the red background. Looks kinda off.
     
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    Ye i know, but i couldnt think of how to blend pure black&white with colour and still make it stand out, hmm maybe this
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    Yea looks better (I don't like colours too much anyways.)
     
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    its nice and simple! The cut on the headphones is really good. background is kinda oversaturated a bit --
    maybe you could add a bit more flow maybe
     
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    Needs flow, but good concept. :)
     
  7. Prankster

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    Thanks for the comments guys, i might go back and rework it later ^^.
     
  8. Hoplite_A2

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    I think it's a good start. But it didn't turn out quite as good as it could've.
    Flow is hurting in this one.

    I think what's hurting this tag the most is the fact that you have a simple render with a
    totally different style background. If you're using sillouhette (i don't think I spelled that right. lol)
    renders, try to use that style as a guide for your BGs and effects. ;)
    Like the left side looks much better than the right side, because it's a bit more simple. :)
    Use big flowy swashes and sparkly things, and dots and stuff rather than a grunge background ;).

    Hope that helps. ^_^
     
  9. Strykor

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    Anyways the contrast in the first one is too high.
     

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