Inner Demon Wp

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by P h o e n i X, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. gforce2k8

    gforce2k8 Well-Known Member

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    Nice use of stocks.
     
  2. Hyper Infinity

    Hyper Infinity Well-Known Member

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    For the most part, I love the lighting and you used the renders very well also. However, it feels a bit empty, though maybe that's what you were going for. And I don't like the text in particular, simply because it's hard to read the smaller text because it's so dark. Anyway, my rating: 7/10
     
  3. Thank you, I guess that's what I'm known for these days :P

    Yeah, I admit it is pretty empty, however I was short on time and resources so I couldn't do much about it. The text was a long shot, but I added it to decrease the amount of empty space.

    Thanks for the comments you guys. :)
     
  4. Vpr99

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    Like it a lot, but I have a couple o suggestions:

    Maybe move the stock of the floating dude so that it is easier to tell that he is coming out of her. Second, with the name stripes, I would maybe grungify them a bit. Use some of the brushes my metalCX on DeviantART
     
  5. I'll see what I can do, thanks for the suggestions. :)
     
  6. Enforcer

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    I personally like it.

    Only thing is what others said, the emptiness of the piece on the left side mainly, and the second line of text is hard to read. Just minor things, but overall a very nicely done piece man. Good Job!
     

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