Did you make the effect on the hand? Thats the only part I somewhat like. Looks like you just stamped a bit with a soft set brush then threw a cloud color adjustment on it.
yeah i made the effects on his hand. thanks for your cnc but thats the style i wanted so im happy with that part.
To much neg space. Hand effect is the only nice thing. The soft brushing is wierd, try smudging it out a little bit.
The sudden change to black looks awkward, like in your other tag, try to keep a good balance with the change to black