the render is pushed to the background a bit by the lightning, and its monotone. other than that, i rly like it.
It is a little over effected. The render looks like a floating head (uh oh) and its not exactly colored well. You should have chose a more colorful render. You need to work on taking the effects out a bit so that your focal can be defined. The colors overall are bland and the text doesn't fit too great, take it out imo. ^_^