In The Forest

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Ryuuji, Jul 7, 2008.

  1. Jul 7, 2008 at 1:49 PM #1
    Ryuuji

    Ryuuji Senior Member

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    I kinda like it, but criticism is always helpful, so don't hold back

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  2. Jul 7, 2008 at 1:57 PM #2
    Hyper Infinity

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    Seems a bit chaotic directly around the render. It's hard to tell at first what the render is. Also, I don't much like the blurring in the background. However, the lighting i good and I absolutely ADORE the text. My rating: 7.5/10
     
  3. Jul 7, 2008 at 1:59 PM #3
    Robin

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    sorry man but the focal is really bad.. and i can't see the render well..
    also the flow is bad..

    nice try tho, keep it up!
     
  4. Jul 7, 2008 at 2:15 PM #4
    Ryuuji

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    heh, i just realized even I can't see the focal well at first glance...
    and yeah, i blurred too much :/
    thanks for the comments, will help my next ones
     

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