Improvement ?

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Razor., Aug 25, 2009.

  1. Razor.

    Razor. New Member

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    This was my first Decent/Basic signature ever made.

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    And this is my best yet, I don't like the "Razor" text, And the signature is a bit to light, Other than that, I like it, I like it a lot .

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  2. Strykor

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    it is interesting lawl. You kinda blurred all out of the background. A little bit too much, I would as well remove the other gunner standing there in the left corner.
    Remove the white border down and up, too.
    You are right, it is basic. But you kinda mixed up basic with boring or something, ther estill has to be some "more". Right now it looks like you took a render, put it on a background and added a text.

    I like the warming on the render though.

    As you said yourself, there could be some improvement on the text, one basic technique is just creating a crippling mask or even set it on soft light, so that you have no problems with the color. ^.^
     

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