how does one make a "small LP?" lmao jk bro. it's nice, but the lighting is wacked out in some places and i think it's too soft of a feel for your render. the colors i mean. anyway, fix the lighting with some touch ups and the text is drawing me away from the focal btw.
Lighting and compo are weird. I don't really like the text, and the guy looks undercontrasted and doesn't match the environment. Keep working on it. It could be amazing with some work. ^_^