Immortals

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  1. RebelYell101

    RebelYell101 Well-Known Member

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    :) Please? (I need help with text)
     
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    Anyone?
     
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    It looks kind of sharp to me, but the render seems like its out of place, like there is pink than an IMMORTAL. Kinda out there. Keep it up though.
     
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    Hehehe is this a possible gift for moi? <33
    Its quite nice but the text could be improved.. doesn't need a blur ^_^
     
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    Yea, I'm pretty much a lost cause when it comes to text. :P
     
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    Text isn't always nessecary, most outcomes actually look better without text. I would suggest using the dodge/burn tool to add a little more depth and then try to recreate the lighting. Afterwards try some adjustment layers to build stronger colors. Just some suggestions.
     
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    You sharpened the background and left the focal point blurred, you should have done the complete opposite to create any sort of depth ^^
     
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    Ok, thanks. :)

    Yea. :P I did it on purpose, just trying something kind of new.
     
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    Kinda sharp imo. Text is eh...
     
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    I hate text. :P
     

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