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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by frozendemon, Feb 12, 2008.

  1. frozendemon

    frozendemon Well-Known Member

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    This is something really random i did , and i wanted some comment on it so i can improve next time.

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    Not too bad, but I think you should get rid of the scanlines and text. :)

    Keep workin on it!
     
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    not likin the lines
    all of it is sharpen so depth perception is lowered
    remove typo or place it better
     
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    frozendemon Well-Known Member

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    How about this

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    scanlines are not the way to go ;p
     
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    scanlines always seem like a fun addition in the begging, but it is very rare that it actually fits the entire tag. For this one, my suggestions are to remove them entirely (sorry :( ) and to darken it/increase the contrast (not by too much but a tad). Its really bright right now, and i think that if the lines arent there, and its got better defined shading (the brightness/contrast would help this) it would have a better composition. Its a good start though, I can see some nice stuff hiding behind those lines ;)
     

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