not likin the lines all of it is sharpen so depth perception is lowered remove typo or place it better
scanlines always seem like a fun addition in the begging, but it is very rare that it actually fits the entire tag. For this one, my suggestions are to remove them entirely (sorry ) and to darken it/increase the contrast (not by too much but a tad). Its really bright right now, and i think that if the lines arent there, and its got better defined shading (the brightness/contrast would help this) it would have a better composition. Its a good start though, I can see some nice stuff hiding behind those lines
