First off I just want to say how great of a job everyone did on my piece titled "Beginning." So here I am with a whole new piece. But dont worry, I will show an updated version of "Beginning" very soon. Now to my most recent piece. I wasn't entirely sure what or where I was going wtih this one. This was mainly to practice making suns/supernova's, but I have decided I want more out of this one. MY WIP UPDATED -What can I do for the "wow" factor? -What else can add to fill up some negative space? -What else can I add/take away from the supernova? -See any major problems? ( I have a tendency to look over alot of things) -Oh and what would be a good title for this? That is all I have to say for now, so once again thanks for all of the help I recieved on my last piece, you guys/gals are great!
Well shouldn't they be really dark? The only light source so far is the supernova in the middle and it is a really strong light source so that is why the planets have the hard shadow on them.
Already there, a great star about to go boom you've got going there. Maybe add some more turbulence and solar flares to create a really unstable looking effect. How does it look full size? If you need some reference to some great stars here are some links: http://synax444.deviantart.com/art/Swallow-the-Sun-96844303 http://priteeboy.deviantart.com/art/Tug-o-War-83815875 The planets are enough - any more would distract and lose the focus of the piece, which is the star. See wow factor The inner shadow/glow on the planets - it's too blue and that's also what I think -=Chris=- means. The brightest part of the star is white which fades to a blue, so why are the planets blue - try making the glow a white and see how that work.
Ok well I updated it. I think it looks alot better, but still I feel it just seems a tad empty, I am not really sure how to explain it. I would add a sort of nebula or something but I think it would distract from the main focal point (supernova). Overall I think this image is pretty close to finished. But if anyone else has some more input I would be very happy to hear it. Oh and one more thing, I have been struggling greatly with a title, so anything help with that would be great also, thanks. All of you have been a big help once again.
