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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by inverse, Jan 9, 2008.

  1. inverse

    inverse Banned from GR

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    I know this is technically an LP, but I wanted some decent C&C for the LAOTM I've used it for.

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    I know text isn't very good, but I'm working on it.
     
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    yeah this should be in LP but looks good love what you did with the arm
     
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    Maybe add more colors and contrast. And as you said, the text could be better.
     
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    inverse Banned from GR

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    Thanks, guys. BTW, I have a full A2 size version of this, and when I've got it to what I see as almost perfect, I'm thinking of getting it printed, and stick it on my wall.
     
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    Great effects and coloring. As someone else said, maybe a bit more coloring. And possibly the text saying " Ironman " make that a redish\orangish color.
     
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    I like the maple leaves on ironman's arm, it gives a sort of cutesy look to it

    im jk, its not that bad
     
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    Not bad but the concept is getting very old already I've seen the same render and similar stocks used all over.
     
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    [.BC] Spectra Well-Known Member

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    i like it, my personal opinion is u see the sign top left coming off the building how it has like separted letters running down it, light it up and make it look like some of them went out like color it a little but not to much as to take away from iron man being the focal point. i think that would add alot to it
     

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