lolz sorry but i must comment good render but you suck it up font is horrible bg good but its simmple clouds you are just paste the render , opicality, font and nothinggggg keep on try
Give the guy a break.. Ass.. Its good but you just need to lighten the blending up in the middle of the render and try and do it more round the edges. Plus try and get a new font if you can [FontFreak] ;P Nice try though ;D