Hybrid

Ok well I was messing around with bunches of things



Version 2 - wanted to try several things


Plz do not just give nice or not nice answers...give some critique plz

 

Wow kalli. Those are some really nice colors. Can I see the original stock? Then I'll give some critique.

 

Haha yea m8, here is the stock....its just her head, but yes with those colors already.

 

I like the text, simple, and elegant. The c4d/background is really well put together. I'm really impressed, kalli. I didn't know you make tags. lawl

 

Nice effects and colors.

Few things I don't like are the lighting seems forced IMO. Soft brushing for light just doesn't do it for me, I recommend using lighting effects for lighting(its what all the cool people do ;p) And I'm not really feeling the text as it is too big and distracts from the focal, maybe tone it down some?

Otherwise nice work(And I like the stock ^_^)

 

Yea i was very unhappy about the lighting, I originally had this black and white and it actually looked better, I am trying to get a better light source in there. As for the text, I can understand that, I will see about getting some smaller text in the tag.

 

Second version up...prob end up doing a combination version 3 of both

 

Cmon, some good critique could really help me!

 

Really looks good man! Maybe the colors would look better if they were the same combination as the stock's face.

 

I love the effecs, especially around the neck
dunno what version's better.
in both, the colors are awsome and all, but in the first one the light looks slightly forced on the top right (even tho i prefer soft brushes to lighting filters), and the text seems too big.
I don't really like the b&w part on the second one, even tho without the lightining it looks better.
also, i'd have probably kept the text as it was in the first version, just smaller.

it still looks very good overall.

i'd like to see a version like the first one, without that light, and with smaller text.

 

okay 1st of all, I prefer V1 (imo it's better bg)
I like the effects around her neck ( I mean C4ds and brushes), colors are pretty nice, text is okay but it could be a little smaller imo
Nice one gratz dude!

 

"Ei kalli wassup man. Never talk to you for ages. Tag has nice effects. v2 is better. The text seems of IMO.

 

Hey humac...yea I have been gone for a few months with rl issues. Yea I still cant get the text just the way I like.

 

nice, lovin v1 .. great effects, gj