there are things i like, and a few things im not to fond of, but it could be a awesome tag, maybe if you work it some more and post v2, I will hold my rating until then coloring is good, a tad mono, remember Hulk wears purple shorts, so it "can" fit if you wish to incorporate another hue. the c4d just looks like to much, create holes and gaps to achieve more depth, a lil negative space will never hurt in most cases, the upper rights flow clashes with the rest of the tag, jus ctrl-T it and align it properly. add other effects, maybe work something off of him screaming, to gain detail add a ambient lightsource typo box looks sweet, just dunno if it works with this tag hope this helps bro, look forward to a ver2 m8 =D
V1 looks better IMO, doesn't have that stuff coming out of his mouth and it isn't as dark. The text box on V1 looks better than on the second, the first one should also have a light source like the second. Good job though
