Wow that was an incredible turnout, the colored version is the best of the two, is all of that smudging for the background?? awesome work!
Nice one Ravr love how the smudging makes it look almost like a beach shore and the splatter really gives it a nice color touch. Good lighting as well.
I think it would look a little better if you sharpened the girl a little bit and maybe add some small speckles to the bottom right and left of the girl. like little circles...idk what you call them. And to the left of her is like a purple border thing down her whole left side, idk it looks weird. you could easily smudge that out of you wanted