Hinata

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  1. Btray_9UJ

    Btray_9UJ Well-Known Member

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    So I've decided to dedicate some time to celebrate Hinata's courage and actually tell Naruto that she loves him^^

    This is what I made up.
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    I've had trouble working with a black&White render. I never did that before and actually I don't know wheter I should like this or not.
    Any tips on how to work with B&W Renders appreciated any other c&c as well :D
     
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    kirbir Senior Member

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    The black and white render doesn't go well with the colour of the BG. You need to make the BG more of a similar colour to the render, either black and white or any other darker colours.

    The BG isn't bad but could use a little more work and a few more effects added to it, also the text isn't very good, it needs changing. Try using a more simple font, also move the text around and try to find a better placement for it.

    Overall the tag isn't bad but it could be better, keep at it and gj
     
  3. Btray_9UJ

    Btray_9UJ Well-Known Member

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    what kind of effects can you guys suggest to add to the background?
     

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