nice penmanship, but i think the black line inside the yellow kinda kills it, i think you should change the bg to more of a creme instead of a white
Hey, I painted dots on the pentool and added cinematic lines. Thanks for the comments all over the places guys, lol. Yes to be honest, I didn't do heaps to it but it's simplistic. ^_^ Faiien, the black line is the pentool, the yellow is a glow I added to it.
Well, tbh it looks a little empty. Like it is missing something. I think the yellow dots look alright, but the contrast and saturatedness makes it look a little odd. I can't comment much on the sig xP So I'll just throw out some ideas you could add. I think you should add some smudging. Calm smudging that is stroke by stroke and doesn't cover up the sig too much. Then maybe add a few effects going from the bottom up. Other than that, it can still have a few cool effects but it is pretty good. I guess quality over quanity. I'm in the middle on this. But yea, you're improving Mort.
