Help With Text

I fixed the text some, what do you all think.

Been browsing the forums for some time now just haven't posted alot.... HI

 

Where you put it is good, but it shpild be smaller.

 

I've tried going smaller then I lose detail? I may need to play around with different text's.
thanks for the help... If I had anything to give you I would.

 

The thing with text is, you aren't supposed to make it distract the viewer from the focal point(which I'm assuming is the guy with the gun) thats why it should be smaller, or lower the opacity a little.

 

I posted my Fix Above, Thanks for the help.

 

i would say make it flow with the sig, you know how you got the light effects doing the wavy stuff, I would make the text flow with that, I'd try using the pen tool to make the path and place the text on it, it makes text much more workable