Hmmm... Yeah, focul's a bit strange. The effects look good, but I don't really like how there's white light all around the edges of the tag. -_- Text is pretty sweet though. I like the concept too. Idk bro, it looks like a hard render to work with. Keep it up though, it's got some cool potential I think.
I really like V2 first one is too dark but the rest are great good job also good job on those effect like it
if you could somehow combine the high contrast of the first with the faint colors of the last one I think you would have a winning combination. maybe move the focal point to the little sister's face too.
The lighting in the top right feels a bit strong and a bit too wide for what it actually illuminates. I like how the effects give it a pretty creepy feeling. Maybe tone down the white surrounding the tag so the light sources are more obvious.
Yea I am gonna see about toning the surrounding lighting down...the top right light is actually the light from the render, nothing done there to it.
Alright, I added one last version...actually took the others off, because this is the one I personally love.
