Haze Signature

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by solidus636, Nov 18, 2007.

  1. solidus636

    solidus636 Well-Known Member

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    Hey guys, I just made a sig from Haze...check it out..

    Please comment/rate. Constructive criticism would be great:D

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    its very messy right now, to tidy it up i suggest blurring parts of the bg (helps with depth as well) also darkening the yellows around the render will help it stand out more, as right now it appear somewhat hidden among your effects. the blending is fine, and the style of text is good too, just a little internal work and i think it'll be nicer ^^
     
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    Render seems low quality. There appears to be a white line around him. I don't know if it's the lighting or if the render was just bad, but that's buggin me.

    I also ditto all that Daecu said. ^_^
     
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    o.alright guys:D
    thanks.

    some guy on the other site was annoying me with his crazy critiquing..but that was great:D

    i'm currently trying to blur some stuff out..and i'll post the new one later..

    also.
    the render wasn't low quality..i don't know why the image shows up with a white outline here.

    hmm..

    edit:i just check the render against a black bg..its just the lighting of the wallpaper that the person rendered it from..

    edit 2:eek:k..here is the new one..i just used a little gaussian blur for the back..didn't do anything for the render and splatter brush erasing..

    top is original..bottom is new one...just for contrast..

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    edit 3: here is an even DARKER one..i think this is much better.

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