Not at all... I like the concept but the colors [mostly the brown] needs work to make it look realistic. I like how you made it look like he fell from above and hit the ground xD
I think the concept is awesome. Like CI said, but the lens flare is a bit too obvious, and sorta doesn't flow with the concept. I love your good usage of stocks to make the concept more real, instead of one render and brushing/smudging. You're like me in a way, I never like to have a boring BG, will use anything from nature to urban to war. Nice man, props to originality.
i think it has superb lighting, but i think it would be better if you can see more things rather than a big portion of the texture you used. i like your style though, good work.
i wanted to do something different and original in this one. i wanted to keep the texture and backround behind the render in balance. if i did it without texture, it would be pretty decent tag also but not so original, just a cool c4d tag. at the same time i couldnt add too much texture or the tag would get too boring(in my eyes) without any action in backround. for me the most important thing is cool concept, ofcourse not always but usually.
I like it a lot, there's gotta be a few sigs that can get away with a little lens flare, and it's subtle enough. Love your style keep it up.
I definitely like V2 Better. But it seems a bit... flat? Cant put my finger on it. Maybe blur it a bit, and add some effects that are sharpened around the lightbulb?