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  1. asq2

    asq2 Senior Member

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    not so pleased with the outcome. im getting rusty

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    that bad? :/
     
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    Not at all... I like the concept but the colors [mostly the brown] needs work to make it look realistic. I like how you made it look like he fell from above and hit the ground xD
     
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    I think the concept is awesome. Like CI said, but the lens flare is a bit too obvious, and sorta doesn't flow with the concept. I love your good usage of stocks to make the concept more real, instead of one render and brushing/smudging. You're like me in a way, I never like to have a boring BG, will use anything from nature to urban to war. :P

    Nice man, props to originality. :)
     
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    thanks for nice comment. added v2
     
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    i think it has superb lighting, but i think it would be better if you can see more things rather than a big portion of the texture you used. i like your style though, good work.
     
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    i really like ur sigs the 2 u got as of now... and this 1 isn't bad either
     
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    i wanted to do something different and original in this one. i wanted to keep the texture and backround behind the render in balance. if i did it without texture, it would be pretty decent tag also but not so original, just a cool c4d tag. at the same time i couldnt add too much texture or the tag would get too boring(in my eyes) without any action in backround. for me the most important thing is cool concept, ofcourse not always but usually.
     
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    I like it a lot, there's gotta be a few sigs that can get away with a little lens flare, and it's subtle enough. Love your style keep it up.
     
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    v2 is much better. Nice job.
     
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    I think it would look good if you took all color away except the yellow of his mask.
     
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    I definitely like V2 Better.
    But it seems a bit... flat?
    Cant put my finger on it.
    Maybe blur it a bit, and add some effects that are sharpened around the lightbulb?
     
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    thx guys. added v3 with some more action in bg. still like v2 the most
     
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    no way man, the grayness is key for your coloring style, don't lose the gray.
     
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    Yeah. nice concept.
     

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