I like the colours and the work itself, but i'll have to point some things out: 1st- the light: the lighting point should be brighter, it doesn't seem to shine enough for the glow her face has. 2nd- the flowers: the seem just stamped along the background, repeatedly. You should at least try to smudge it a bit to make it more unique. 3rd- the text: i said it on your other post, i'll say it again. I think you write too much. Plus it's quite hard to understand what's her name. But anyway, nice work.
What Gin said, also i think it seems empty and the wireframe is just filling space at the moment. Or it looks out of place in there..
