Halo

C&C please.

V2:



V3:

 

I like the atmosphere but I think you blurred so much that the render looks like it's just there and floating.

 

Defanitly agreed with g35 maybe u should sharpen it a little bit

 

V2:

 

Render needs better blending
Lighting defo. needs improvement on the render

 

I think the colors of the render/explosion could use an improvement as well. They seem a little too yellow. Has potential to be a great tag.

 

v2 ftw good job

 

Render doesn't fit right now. You need to fix the lighting on it and blend it in a bit. It just sticks out too much.

 

Spend like 20 more minutes working on it, and see what you get after that.

 

Agreed I'll get started now.

Thanks doods anyway.

 

V3:

 

blue=fail stick with the old colors and work on the other issues.

 

I agree, the original colors worked much better.

 

your the first person i saw that did something good with a halo sig and all i got to say is this bravo

 

I thought the blue color would give it a nice space feeling to it. But whatever I'll fix it again I suppose.