As the metal guy snuck about the room of random line thing creatures, he realized he needed to pee, but lacked a can opener, and besides, everyone one would see him with it being so bright outside. Ok, lose the huge text, try to always us a 9-10pt font if you can help it, and try to lower the opacity of it to about 75-85% just to help it blend better. Also, the border is rarely a good idea for a signature, it really takes away from it. Though I will say, this is a pretty decent tagnature. Erase some of the parts of the C4D off the front of his chest, lower the light source brightness a bit, and fix the font, and I think you got a pretty decent signature. It's got great flow and compo, with pretty decent depth too!
Heh, I don't think it's that bad. ^_^ I like the whispy feel. Very nice blending. Great color choice as well. Just fix the text up. Lighting's a little overpowering imo too. Keep it up. Good work
I actually like it. The affects look great. The only thing I would change is that their are some empty spots but thats not always a bad thing, I would like to see what you come up with though.
that looks awesome man. with smaller text and maybe a different border or no border itd be that much better
I think it looks very good. Good blending and everythin. The text could be a littlle smaller, but overall, very good sig. 8/10
